Review: You Burn Me by Stella and Audra Price

You Burn Me by Stella and Audra Price
My Rating: 1 of 5 stars

Synopsis:

A priestess of The Morrigan, Xxieda Rolla is a woman who has known success in her business, fulfillment in her family life and is only missing one thing: the love of the man that would have her for always. Sent to Shadow Heights New York by her goddess to find him, she meets the ever tasty, ever surly Dante Barratt. Sparks fly, and so does Amaretto Latte.

Dante, a dealer of rare and illegal commodities, and a very tempestuous fire demon might want the woman who's brown eyes haunt him, but knows better then to get involved with someone who just screams purity. Shes hot, and successful in ways he never could be, and knows a man that just gave away his soul like he did didn't deserve a woman like that.

After a chance encounter on a dark street corner, and an earth shattering kiss, Both are powerless to deny the chemistry between them... until Xxieda tells him her secret: shes a virgin.

Caught between his head and his heart, can Dante accept the fact that Fate sometimes gives us exactly what we really need, not what we think we want?

My Thoughts:

I read the synopsis and thought that this might be a good book. However, by the time I reached 24% on my kindle version of it, I was very irritated. I don't mind one or two spelling or grammatical errors but this book has tons of them. The authors used defiantly instead of definitely, obliviously instead obviously, were instead of where and so many more. The sentences didn't make sense because the definitions of the words used were totally different from the words that should have been there. Unfortunately, I am gonna have to DNF this book. The story line would have been a good one with a bit of proofreading.